Sumi H. Inkblot

Welcome to the YWS! First off, it's not a contest. ^_~ So don't jump around asking how you did -- how you do is how you do, and we of ...

Hey! You've got some really neat ideas here. I love the idea of one saying an element and the effect being -- yeah, that's just really neat. I'm going to ...

Firstly, welcome to the YWS! Feel free to PM me if you have any questions on the site. ^_^ Secondly, it's a general policy to critique two pieces of other's ...

I don't know, that was a while ago, i should read it again. Everyone, and every book, deserves a second chance. :wink: [s]Eragon is the only exception to that.[/s] :P ...

"Oh, it's bad luck to be you! A Chosen One of Many isn't new! When your life has run amuck, you will see that you're the shmuck! Oh, it's bad ...

I could not get into "Inkheart". I have no idea why. But it was just... "Bleagh, when does the plot start?", though not quite as badly as, say, Tolkein or ...

wait Twit Are insulting him or not lolz i can't tell It doesn't matter if you are though each to their own If Twitters is remarking on Paolini, it's probably ...

I want to read the rest of this. Man, your nano is so much more interesting than mine. :*bangs head against brick wall*: Please please put it up in December? ...

Okay. This poem, as a whole, does not add up to what the title says it is. The snakes of tempered steel have nothing to do with the actual intention ...

Ah, thank you for the PM and sorry about not 'tiquing immediately. >.>" Agreeing with the above stated, this just seems to lack the... oomph? of the previous installments. There ...

Um...okay. Firstly, this is much too short to be on its own. This would make a prologue or a decent blurb (or whatever the thing inside the cover is called....), ...

Polka's already caught all the grammatical stuff, so I'll start on spacing and all that shniz. Firstly, this is a chunk of text. Space it up, it makes it look ...

Whoa, whoa! 'Bit long, here! I only got through the first half of this. :P In general, it's good to start off on a smaller scale. XD Just the first ...

Hmmm...I'm thinking "Hexwood" by Diana Wynne Jones (which is her equivalent of "LotR", slogging-through wise.), "The Great Good Thing" by Roderick Townley or "Alice in Wonderland/Through the Looking-G

XD If I'd read this about a year ago I'd be flippin' angry, but now I'm just laughing. However, we want it known that we are not forcing them to ...